IELTS Writing sample essays, page 13
Students’ Task 1 and Task 2 answers to the questions asked most often, newest first. Each is marked by Axiom with a band for every criterion and its revisions in place, and shared without the writer’s name. Estimated by AI. It isn’t an official IELTS score.
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| Education or free time for the youngToo much attention is provided for students study . Principals should spent more money on leisure activities of youth .… | Task 2 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 271 |
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| Education or free time for the youngEducation of students is getting extremely high attention and resources, and more government subsidies should be… | Task 2 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 394 |
| Robots at home and at workRobots are replacing an increasing number of jobs of both employees and households. Although it may pose some problems… | Task 2 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 339 |
| How recycled paper is madeThe picture shows the process of recycling paper. Overall, the process comprises four main stages (making pulp,… | Task 1 | 7.5 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 178 |
| Is scientific research a waste?Some individuals believe that plenty science related research implemented is wasting money and time. This essay… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 277 |
| How recycled paper is madeThe diagram illustrates the process of making recycled paper. Overall, there are four main stages: making pulp,… | Task 1 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 135 |
| How recycled paper is madeThe diagram shows the production of recycled paper. Overall, this process can be divided into four stages: making pulp,… | Task 1 | 7.5 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 156 |
| Education or free time for the youngThere is an opinion that the education of the students is overly emphasized, and the government needs to spend more… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 227 |
| Parks turned into gardensSome cities are letting local residents plant fruit and vegetables of their own by turning public parks and open spaces… | Task 2 | 7.5 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 504 |
| Average house pricesThe line graph illustrates changes in the house prices, measured in thousands of dollars, in three nations from 1997 to… | Task 1 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 195 |
| Water use in six countriesThe table shows the distribution of water cubic metres (m^3) in 3 different sectors in six countries namely: Australia,… | Task 1 | 5.5 | 6.0 | 5.0 | 6.0 | 5.0 | 173 |
| Australian exports to four countriesThe line graph illustrates changes in Australian exports to four different countries between 1990 and 2012. Overall,… | Task 1 | 7.5 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 163 |
| How recycled paper is madeThe diagram describes the steps involved in recyling paper. Overall, paper goes through four main stages, namely making… | Task 1 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 166 |
| Employment in five types of workThe bar chart compares five employment sectors in terms of how many people were employed in an Australian region in two… | Task 1 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 9.0 | 179 |
| Junk food and educationIt has been scientifically proven that consumption of excessive amounts of fast food is affecting people’s health… | Task 2 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 447 |
| How recycled paper is madeThe diagram shows the process by which recycled paper is produced. Overall, the process entails four main stages,… | Task 1 | 7.5 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 242 |
| Talking about moneyMoney has become one of the central topics of conversations today. This can be attributed to the development in the news… | Task 2 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 348 |
| Energy sources in AustraliaIt is clear that the proportions in 2030 are expected to change dramatically. In 2008, the highest and lowest… | Task 1 | 4.5 | 5.0 | 5.0 | 5.0 | 4.0 | 227 |
| Energy sources in AustraliaThe pie charts depict the information about energy sources in Australia in 2008 and predictions for 2030. It is clear… | Task 1 | 5.0 | 5.0 | 5.0 | 5.0 | 5.0 | 244 |
| Small income gaps and happinessPeople have suggested many different ways to create perfect societies. Some people argue that one way to develop happier… | Task 2 | 7.5 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 357 |
| Reasons for absence from workThe bar chart illustrates the reasons for not going to work in a certain European country between 2000 and 2010. Units… | Task 1 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 188 |
| Passenger travel by transport typeThe bar graph compares the number of kilometers, measured in billions (bn), travelled by passengers using five modes of… | Task 1 | 7.5 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 232 |
| A new international languageSome people argue that inventing a new international language is needed for a better global communication. While having… | Task 2 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 390 |
| A new international languageThere is a view that some people think that we need to invent a new language for international communication, while… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 295 |
| Australian exports to four countriesThe line graph illustrates the proportion of Australian export to four different countries between 1990 and 2012.… | Task 1 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 213 |
| A new international languageA considerable proportion of population say that we have to create one global tongue for communicating easily with… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 279 |
| Shakefield town, 1995 and nowThe maps illustrate how the layout of the town named Shakefield changed from 1995 to now. Overall, the town has… | Task 1 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 252 |
| A new international languageIt is argued that a new language to communicate internationally needs to be introduced. While the creation of a new… | Task 2 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 306 |
| Employment in five types of workThe bar chart provides data on the number of people working in five different employment sectors in a particular region… | Task 1 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 171 |
| Employment in five types of workThe bar chart illustrates how many people were employed in five different work sectors, namely sales, accounting,… | Task 1 | 7.5 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 209 |
| Team activities and life skillsIt is said that team-oriented activities can teach more essential skills than those of which can be done alone. Although… | Task 2 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 323 |
| Energy sources in AustraliaTHE PIE CHART GIVES INFORMATION HOW ENERGY SOURCES IN AUSTRALIA IN 2008 AND PREDICTIONS FOR 2030. OVERALL, WHILE COAL… | Task 1 | 5.0 | 5.0 | 5.0 | 5.0 | 5.0 | 176 |
| A new international languageAs the world populating is raising, the demand for a solo language that can be globally used for communication also is… | Task 2 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 392 |
| Robots at home and at workThe advent of technology has changed many aspects of people’s lives; robots are not an exception. These days, a vast… | Task 2 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 463 |
| Changing eating habitsPeople have altered eating habits these days, and this is causing many health issues like obesity. While this can be… | Task 2 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 413 |
| Passenger travel by transport typeThe bar chart compares the number of kilometers, measured in billions, travelled by using five different modes of… | Task 1 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 171 |
| A new international languageThere is a view that inventing a new language for international communication on a global scale can be at an advantage.… | Task 2 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 252 |
| A new international languageNowadays, English is widely being spoken around the world and considered as an international language. There are some… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 268 |
| Education or free time for the youngEducation has always been a cornerstone of individual and societal progress, which is why governments often allocate… | Task 2 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 393 |
| A new international languageToday's developing world knowing other languages is crucial in order to communicate with foreigners. Some say if the… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 344 |
| Education or free time for the youngEducation has always been a top priority for nearly everybody and hence governments usually allocate a great amount of… | Task 2 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 450 |
| A new international languageIn an increasingly interconnected world, the proposition of creating a universal language to facilitate international… | Task 2 | 8.5 | 9.0 | 9.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 347 |
| A new international languageIn an era characterized by cross-cultural misunderstandings and misinterpretations, many linguists call for the creation… | Task 2 | 8.0 | 9.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 337 |
| A new international languageThere is a view that a new language should be invented for communication on a worldwide scale. While this idea may seem… | Task 2 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 294 |
| A new international languageLanguage barriers hinder interaction and slacken the pace of innovations. Therefore, some argue that to facilitate… | Task 2 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 314 |
| A new international languageIn today’s world, some people argue that a new language should be introduced in all countries around the world in order… | Task 2 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 298 |
| A new international languageIn the modern world, where globalization continues to bridge cultural and linguistic divides, some advocate for creating… | Task 2 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 335 |
| Australian exports to four countriesThe line graph illustrates the proportion of export to four countries namely, Japan, US, China and India from Australia… | Task 1 | 4.5 | 5.0 | 5.0 | 5.0 | 4.0 | 220 |