IELTS Writing sample essays, page 8
Students’ Task 1 and Task 2 answers to the questions asked most often, newest first. Each is marked by Axiom with a band for every criterion and its revisions in place, and shared without the writer’s name. Estimated by AI. It isn’t an official IELTS score.
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| Junk food and educationNowadays, many people eat unhealthy food such as fast food, which is harmful to their health. This causes serious issues… | Task 2 | 7.5 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 322 |
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| Junk food and educationNowadays, many people eat unhealthy food such as fast food, which is bad for their health. This leads to serious… | Task 2 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 289 |
| Australian exports to four countriesThe chart compares four countries in terms of Australian exports between 1990 and 2012. Overall, While Australian… | Task 1 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 268 |
| Average house pricesThe given line graph illustrates the changes in accommodation prices in three different countries from 1997 to 2014.… | Task 1 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 136 |
| Passenger travel by transport typeThe chart compares five types of transports in terms of the total distance travelled by passengers in the UK between… | Task 1 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 199 |
| Space exploration and spendingIN recent years governments around the world have been spending more money on space programs. Many rockets are being… | Task 2 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 315 |
| Space exploration and spendingIt is though that space exploration is just waste of money and resources, in my opinion, it is better to deal with… | Task 2 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 323 |
| Working in old ageSome people think that elderly individuals should keep working even after they reach retirement age, if they are still… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 327 |
| Working in old ageIt is thought that it is beneficial for older people to continue their jobs if they still can do it. I completely… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 323 |
| Talking about moneyDiscussions about the money are significantly raised among individuals. This trend caused by rising cost of living,… | Task 2 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 262 |
| Talking about moneyNowadays, it is becoming common for people to talk about money. The reason behind this is that it is human nature… | Task 2 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 321 |
| Talking about moneyIt is often claimed that conversation about money is increasing dramatically. This is due to the growth of cost of… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 404 |
| Talking about moneyNowadays people put money as a top priority because of their culture and social media platforms. It has negative effects… | Task 2 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 401 |
| Passenger travel by transport typeThe bar chart provides a comparison of five modes of transportation - bicycle, bike, air, bus, and rail - based on the… | Task 1 | 6.5 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 201 |
| University or a job after schoolThe question of whether young individuals should study in tertiary education or not has long been a topic of debate,… | Task 2 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 312 |
| Australian exports to four countriesThe line graph provides information about the proportion of Australian exports to four countries, namely Japan, the US,… | Task 1 | 7.5 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 220 |
| Australian exports to four countriesThe line graph presents data on the proportion of Australian exports to four countries, namely Japan, the US, China, and… | Task 1 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 184 |
| Age and job applicantsThere is a growing trend where job applicants in inappropriate age cannot be rejected by companies in some parts of the… | Task 2 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 298 |
| Declining animals and plantsAnimal and plants’ reduction in numbers are true for many countries nowadays. The need for meat and skin that come from… | Task 2 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 468 |
| Small homes without outdoor spaceSince metropolises' infrastructure is designed to facilitate as many dwellers as possible, it is being done by utilizing… | Task 2 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 358 |
| Water use in six countriesThe table compares the quantities of water used in three sectors—agriculture, industry, and households—across six… | Task 1 | 8.0 | 9.0 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 236 |
| Employment in five types of workThe bar chart compares employment levels across five types of work in one Australian region in 2001 and 2008. Overall,… | Task 1 | 7.5 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 213 |
| Passenger travel by transport typeThe given bart chart shows the total distance travelled by passangers on five specific types of transport in the UK and… | Task 1 | 5.5 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 5.0 | 247 |
| Visitors to three areasThe line graph illustrates the number of overseas visitors to three tourist areas in a European country — the coast, the… | Task 1 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 194 |
| Visitors to three areasThe provided line graph illustrates the number of oversea visitors to three various areas in European country-the lakes,… | Task 1 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 170 |
| Students and other activitiesIt is undisputable fact that, in today's world, full time students ought to focus more attention on their studies,… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 274 |
| Parents’ pressure to succeedThese days, it is becoming increasingly common for parents to pressurise their children to be successful. While there… | Task 2 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 332 |
| A new international languageInventing a new language is suggested to communicate internationally. While to some extent people would benefit from… | Task 2 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 360 |
| Talking about moneyIn our modern age, part of inhabitants' lives consists of money and thinking more about how to become a millionaire. In… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 304 |
| Talking about moneyIn our modern age, part of inhabitants life consist of money and think more how to become a millionaire. In my opinion,… | Task 2 | 5.5 | 6.0 | 5.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 305 |
| Employment in five types of workThe bar chart illustrates the number of people who were employed in five types of work in one region of Australia… | Task 1 | 7.5 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 204 |
| Employment in five types of workThe bar chart illustrates the number of people who employed in five types of work on one region of Australia between… | Task 1 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 5.0 | 209 |
| Employment in five types of workThe column chart compares the number of employees working in five different employment sectors in a certain region of… | Task 1 | 8.0 | 9.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 197 |
| Looking for life on other planetsMany people expect their respective governments to allocate funds to search for habitable planets in the universe while… | Task 2 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 485 |
| Australian exports to four countriesThe line graph illustrates the proportion of Australian exports to four countries—Japan, the United States, China, and… | Task 1 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 197 |
| Australian exports to four countriesThe line graph illustrates the proportion of Australian exports to four countries, namely Japan, the US, China, and… | Task 1 | 7.5 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 241 |
| Individuals and the environmentThere is a debate about whether individuals can make a difference by protecting the environment or not. While latter… | Task 2 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 266 |
| Water use in six countriesThe table illustrates the volume of water used for domestic, agricultural, and industrial purposes in six countries,… | Task 1 | 7.5 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 201 |
| Water use in six countriesThe table provides data about how much water was consumed in three sectors – households, agriculture and industry –… | Task 1 | 7.5 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 262 |
| Raising the cost of fuelIt’s said by some people that making fuel more expensive can be one the most effective solutions to environmental… | Task 2 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 338 |
| Robots at home and at workAs a result of significant advancements in technologies, scientists have invented robots that are able to replace us in… | Task 2 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 388 |
| Small income gaps and happinessIn recent years, the impact of the widening gap between the wealthy and the poor on societal happiness has sparked an… | Task 2 | 8.0 | 9.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 425 |
| University or a job after schoolWhen they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their education. While there are… | Task 2 | 7.5 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 271 |
| Australian exports to four countriesThe line chart illustrates the percentage of Australian exports sent to Japan, the United States, China, and India… | Task 1 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 201 |
| Team activities and life skillsThere is a debate over the importance of group or team activities in comparison to autonomous undertakings, with some… | Task 2 | 7.5 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 280 |
| Team activities and life skillsThe question of acquiring important life skills through team activities has long been a topic of debate, with some… | Task 2 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 311 |
| Raising the cost of fuelFinding robust solutions to environmental problems has long been a topic of debate, with some individuals believing that… | Task 2 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 317 |
| Australian exports to four countriesThe graph compares the proportion of goods exported from Australia to four countries between 1990 and 2012. Overall,… | Task 1 | 7.5 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 225 |