Примеры эссе IELTS Writing с проверкой
Ответы студентов Task 1 и Task 2 на самые частые вопросы, сначала новые. Каждый проверен Axiom: балл по каждому критерию и правки прямо в тексте. Имена авторов не показываются. Оценка ИИ, а не официальный балл IELTS. Эссе и отчёты написаны на английском, как и на экзамене.
СортировкаСначала новые
| Women in parliamentThe line graph illustrates the proportion of female members of parliament in five different countries between 2000 and… | Task 1 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 305 |
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| Age and job applicantsIn some parts of the world, it is illegal for rejecting young people from becoming involved in a organisation, but i… | Task 2 | 5.5 | 6.0 | 5.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 375 |
| Age and job applicantsToday the world's economy is on the brink of collapsing. Everyone in one family has to work to live a stable life.… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 427 |
| Passenger travel by transport typeThe bar chart illustrates the total distance which the passengers travelled on different types of transport (bicycle,… | Task 1 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 171 |
| Passenger travel by transport typeThe bar chart compares the distance visited by tourists on transport (Bicycle, Bike, Air, Bus, Rail) and total from 1990… | Task 1 | 5.5 | 6.0 | 5.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 131 |
| Passenger travel by transport typeThe bar graph compares the total distance of passengers' travel on five different types of transport in the UK from 1990… | Task 1 | 4.5 | 5.0 | 4.0 | 5.0 | 5.0 | 141 |
| Passenger travel by transport typeThe bar charts compare five different transports (bicycle, bike, airplane, bus, rail) in terms of the total distance… | Task 1 | 5.0 | 5.0 | 5.0 | 5.0 | 5.0 | 128 |
| Passenger travel by transport typeThe bar chart highlights the information of how long distance travelled by people on five different types of transport —… | Task 1 | 4.5 | 5.0 | 4.0 | 5.0 | 5.0 | 138 |
| Passenger travel by transport typeThe bar chart compares five different types of transportations according to the distance passengers travelled in the UK… | Task 1 | 7.5 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 236 |
| Passenger travel by transport typeThe bar chart highlights information about the total distance travelled by passengers on five types of transport in the… | Task 1 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 146 |
| Declining animals and plantsSome youngsters consider it challenging to concentrate on school. From my perspectives, I strongly believe that… | Task 2 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 253 |
| Employment in five types of workThe bar chart illustrates the number of people employed in five different types of work in a certain region in Australia… | Task 1 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 162 |
| Parks turned into gardensThere was a change in the number of public green spaces and recreational areas which are converted into gardens. While… | Task 2 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 275 |
| Average house pricesThe line graph illustrates the average house prices in three nations from 1997 to 2014. Overall, the amount of house… | Task 1 | 4.5 | 5.0 | 4.0 | 5.0 | 5.0 | 314 |
| Working in old ageIt is often argued that people in their older age can continue working, if they can. I completely agree with this… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 296 |
| Working in old ageOne of the most controversial questions is whether people have to work in old age, if it is not impossible to do so. The… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 356 |
| Working in old ageIn recent years, the majority of people are mostly prefer t continue working in their old age, if they have enough… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 338 |
| Resources for wild animalsIn recent years, the viewpoint of the fact that an enormous amount of focus and significant number of financial and… | Task 2 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 452 |
| University library, 2005 and todayThe two maps compare the changes of university library layout between 2005 and current. Overall, the library has become… | Task 1 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 193 |
| Resources for wild animalsThere is preveling view that for protecting wild animls and birds allocating a lot of resources and focus while this may… | Task 2 | 5.0 | 6.0 | 4.0 | 5.0 | 5.0 | 275 |
| Age and job applicantsIn today’s fast-paced world, there are divergent views regarding the influence of people’s age when applying for a new… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 298 |
| Overseas visitors to the UKThe line graph illustrates the general quantity of people from overseas who visited to the UK for purposes like holiday,… | Task 1 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 248 |
| Imported or local foodIt has been observed that in many countries, individuals prefer to buy imported food more compared to food that has been… | Task 2 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 292 |
| Robots at home and at workThe world that we live in today is dominated by complacating numerous tasks with robots at home and at work. While there… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 351 |
| Employment in five types of workThe bar chart illustrates the number of employees in five different types of work - sales, accounting, computing,… | Task 1 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 169 |
| Employment in five types of workThe bar chart illustrates the number of employees in five different types of work - sales, accounting, computing,… | Task 1 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 170 |
| Robots at home and at workThe world we live in today is dominated by robots that complicate numerous tasks at home and at work. While there are… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 352 |
| Imported or local foodNowadays, in many countries consuming and buying imported food has become a common feature of peoples’ life. This mainly… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 270 |
| Space exploration and spendingMany people consider cosmic related researches is waste of resources, while others think that it is more benefecial to… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 342 |
| Timber, pulp and paper productionThe line chart illustrates how three forest industry produce products in a European country, namely timber pulp and… | Task 1 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 213 |
| Employment in five types of workThe given chart illustrtaes data on the number of people employed in five types of work in a certain region in Australia… | Task 1 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 171 |
| Employment in five types of workThe given chart illustrates data on the number of people employed in five types of work in a certain region in Australia… | Task 1 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 175 |
| Declining animals and plantsIt is observed that, in recent years, there has been a significant decline in the number of animal and plant species in… | Task 2 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 342 |
| Imported or local foodThere is no doubt that in the contemporary world, many people are choosing to purchase imported food instead of local… | Task 2 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 280 |
| Renewable energy shareThe given bar chart shows the percentage of renewable energy of total supply in four different countries- Australia,… | Task 1 | 4.5 | 5.0 | 4.0 | 5.0 | 5.0 | 187 |
| Resources for wild animalsMany individuals think that there is too much attention and too many resources for protecting wild animals and birds. I… | Task 2 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 288 |
| Space exploration and spendingIn the modern world, many scientists have a strong willingness to exlpore the space to find out something useful for our… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 307 |
| Talking about moneyIn our developing world, people discussing about finance releated issues are found to be increasingly prevelent. In this… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 454 |
| Shakefield town, 1995 and nowThe maps illustrate the main changes that took place in a town of Shakefield from 1995 to the present. Overall,… | Task 1 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 300 |
| Team activities and life skillsThere is a view that group or team activities can teach essential skills for life that other activities which are done… | Task 2 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 348 |
| Parents telling children storiesIn the contemporary world, there is an ongoing debate which some people believe that it is important for parents to tell… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 294 |
| Changing eating habitsToday, eating habits of individuals are altered around the world, resulting them the number of health issues including… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 308 |
| Darwin waterfront, 2009 and 2014The maps illustrate the changes that were made to waterfront area of Darwin town from 2009 to 2014. Overall, the town… | Task 1 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 311 |
| Declining animals and plantsNowadays, it is a widely held concern that decreasing the quantity of natural habitat is becoming a common issue across… | Task 2 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 280 |
| Looking for life on other planetsThere is a debate over whether authorities should spend public money to explore new planet to live, while others think… | Task 2 | 6.5 | 7.0 | 6.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 254 |
| Overseas visitors to the UKThe line graph illustrates the changes in the number of immigrants to the UK for three different purposes over a period… | Task 1 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 211 |
| Changing eating habitsThe average BMI in many developed countries like the US and UK has seen a massive rise in the last few years. As a… | Task 2 | 8.5 | 9.0 | 9.0 | 8.0 | 8.0 | 507 |
| Ethanol fuel from cornThe diagram illustrates the production of ethanol fuel from corn. Overall, corn undergoes several distinct stages before… | Task 1 | 7.0 | 8.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 7.0 | 160 |