University library, 2005 and today: IELTS Task 1 answer #7, band 7.0
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193 words. Marked by Axiom on 12 September 2026. Estimated by AI. It isn’t an official IELTS score.
The plan this answer describes
University library, 2005
- The layout combines bookshelves, large study tables, borrowing/returns, computer desks and an office.
University library, today
- Private study desks replace the earlier central arrangement.
- Automated borrowing is shown on the left and student-laptop desks are shown on the right and bottom.
- Gone by University library, today
- Library office
Academic Task 1193 words
The map shows a university library in 2005 and the same library today
The two maps compare the changes of university library layout between 2005 and current.
Overall, the library has become more modern and visitor-friendly, with the introduction of a wide range of facilities.
Coherence & cohesion
RevisedSome of the library's original facilities were maintained.
This revision provides a slight change in perspective, which can enhance the overall cohesion of the essay.
Looking at the 2005 plan, bookshelves were at the bottom, with an entrance to the left and a library office located to the right. Three study tables were situated in front of the entrance, next to which was a book browsing and returns room.
Lexical resource
RevisedBookshelves were located on the western and northern sides of the library, while desks with computers were placed on the right-hand side.
The use of 'were located' and 'were placed' is more formal and precise.
Grammar & accuracy
RevisedTurning to the current layout, six private study desks have been placed in the middle of the library, leading to the elimination of three study tables and the book browsing and returns room.
The use of 'built' implies a construction process, which is not the case. 'Placed' is a more appropriate term in this context.
Coherence & cohesion
RevisedOnce the bookshelves on the western side of the library were removed, eight automated book borrowing shelves were introduced.
This revision provides a clearer sequence of events, which can improve the cohesion of the writing.
Grammar & accuracy
RevisedThe bookshelves at the bottom, the library office, and the desks with computers have been replaced with desks for student laptops, while the entrance and the layout of the library's top section remained unchanged.
The phrase 'turned into' is not the best choice here. 'Replaced with' is more accurate in conveying the change.
Select a highlighted passage to see its suggested revision.
What Axiom wrote for each criterion: why the answer earned its band, and what to work on next.
Coherence & cohesion
Band 7.0/ 9
The essay is logically organized and ideas are connected well. The use of cohesive devices is effective, with appropriate referencing and sequencing of information.
Suggestions
- Consider using a wider range of linking words and phrases to further improve the flow of your writing.
Sentence revisions 2
RevisedSome of the library's original facilities were maintained.
This revision provides a slight change in perspective, which can enhance the overall cohesion of the essay.
RevisedOnce the bookshelves on the western side of the library were removed, eight automated book borrowing shelves were introduced.
This revision provides a clearer sequence of events, which can improve the cohesion of the writing.
Grammar & accuracy
Band 7.0/ 9
The essay demonstrates a good control of a range of grammatical structures. There are a few minor errors, but they do not impede communication.
Sentence revisions 2
RevisedTurning to the current layout, six private study desks have been placed in the middle of the library, leading to the elimination of three study tables and the book browsing and returns room.
The use of 'built' implies a construction process, which is not the case. 'Placed' is a more appropriate term in this context.
RevisedThe bookshelves at the bottom, the library office, and the desks with computers have been replaced with desks for student laptops, while the entrance and the layout of the library's top section remained unchanged.
The phrase 'turned into' is not the best choice here. 'Replaced with' is more accurate in conveying the change.
Lexical resource
Band 7.0/ 9
The range of vocabulary is quite wide and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic usage. However, there are a few instances where word choice could be improved for greater precision.
Sentence revisions 2
RevisedThe library has been modernized and made more visitor-friendly, with the introduction of a diverse range of facilities.
The term 'visitor-friendly' is a bit informal for this type of report. 'Modernized' is a more precise term than 'has become.'
RevisedBookshelves were located on the western and northern sides of the library, while desks with computers were placed on the right-hand side.
The use of 'were located' and 'were placed' is more formal and precise.
Task achievement
Band 8.0/ 9
The essay addresses all parts of the task and presents a clear overview of the information provided. The essay also makes clear and appropriate comparisons where relevant.
Suggestions
- Ensure that you maintain a formal tone throughout the report. There are a few instances where a more formal tone could be used.
- Pay attention to the use of articles and prepositions, as these are sometimes incorrectly used in the report.
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