Foreign or local films and TV: IELTS Task 2 essay #6, band 8.0
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Task 2297 words
Some people think that it is good for a country’s culture to import foreign films and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce them locally. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some believe that importing foreign films and TV programmes is beneficial for a country's culture, while others think that producing them locally is a better choice. Although foreign programmes can introduce people to different cultures, I believe that local productions are more important for protecting national traditions.
For example, American films often show different traditions, modern technology and ways of living. This can help viewers understand other cultures and become more open-minded. Compared to people who only watch local programmes, those who watch international content can gain a wider understanding of the world. Thus, some may advocate for importing more foreign films and TV programmes.
Coherence & cohesion
RevisedImporting foreign films and TV programmes, on one hand, is said to have several advantages.
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Lexical resource
RevisedOne primary reason why people enjoy foreign content is that it enables them to familiarize themselves with other countries and their ways of life.
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Lexical resource
RevisedForeign programmes also offer a diverse range of entertainment, extending from comedy to documentaries.
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Far from the influence of foreign lifestyles, local productions can show traditional values, customs and languages, which is especially valuable for younger generations.
Coherence & cohesion
RevisedOn the other hand, it is argued that producing films and programmes locally is important for preserving national identity.
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Grammar & accuracy
RevisedUzbekistan, for instance, serves as a great example where local films have been successful in introducing people to national traditions.
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Grammar & accuracy
RevisedThese are cultural features that foreign productions often overlook as they typically focus on their own societies.
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Grammar & accuracy
RevisedLocal films also enrich the lives of viewers by establishing a connection with their history and traditions.
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Therefore, I firmly believe that countries should support their own film industries while still allowing people to enjoy foreign content.
Coherence & cohesion
RevisedIn conclusion, despite the benefits of importing foreign programmes in understanding different cultures, I maintain that the focus should be on producing local films and TV programmes.
This revision makes the sentence more formal and academic.
Lexical resource
RevisedThe unique offerings of local productions make them an integral part of cultural preservation.
The revision provides a more natural and precise word choice.
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Coherence & cohesion
Band 8.0/ 9
The essay is logically organized and ideas are connected well. The introduction and conclusion are clear and relevant. However, there are a few areas where the flow of ideas could be improved.
Suggestions
- Try to use a wider range of linking words to connect your ideas.
- Ensure that your examples are directly relevant to the point you are making.
Sentence revisions 3
RevisedImporting foreign films and TV programmes, on one hand, is said to have several advantages.
This revision makes the sentence more formal and academic.
RevisedOn the other hand, it is argued that producing films and programmes locally is important for preserving national identity.
This revision makes the sentence more formal and academic.
RevisedIn conclusion, despite the benefits of importing foreign programmes in understanding different cultures, I maintain that the focus should be on producing local films and TV programmes.
This revision makes the sentence more formal and academic.
Grammar & accuracy
Band 8.0/ 9
The essay uses a wide range of complex structures. There are few grammatical errors, but they do not impede communication.
Sentence revisions 3
RevisedUzbekistan, for instance, serves as a great example where local films have been successful in introducing people to national traditions.
The revision provides a more complex and accurate sentence structure.
RevisedThese are cultural features that foreign productions often overlook as they typically focus on their own societies.
The revision provides a more natural and precise sentence structure.
RevisedLocal films also enrich the lives of viewers by establishing a connection with their history and traditions.
The revision provides a more natural and precise sentence structure.
Lexical resource
Band 8.0/ 9
The essay uses a wide range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice.
Sentence revisions 3
RevisedOne primary reason why people enjoy foreign content is that it enables them to familiarize themselves with other countries and their ways of life.
The revision provides a more natural and precise word choice.
RevisedForeign programmes also offer a diverse range of entertainment, extending from comedy to documentaries.
The revision provides a more natural and precise word choice.
RevisedThe unique offerings of local productions make them an integral part of cultural preservation.
The revision provides a more natural and precise word choice.
Task response
Band 8.0/ 9
The essay addresses the task fully and presents a clear position throughout the response. Both sides of the argument are discussed, and the writer's opinion is clearly stated. However, the argument could be further developed in places.
Suggestions
- Try to provide more specific examples to support your arguments.
- Ensure that you fully develop your points and provide a thorough discussion of both sides of the argument.
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