IELTS Task 2 two-part essay: Time away from family
A Task 2 two-part question. Answer each question directly, and give the two parts about the same weight.
5 students’ essays below, each marked by Axiom, from band 6.5 to 8.0. Updated on 25 December 2024.
The question
Nowadays, more and more people from different cities are spending more time away from their families.
What are the possible reasons and the effects on the people themselves and their families?
Students’ essays on this question, marked by Axiom
Real answers, shared without their writers’ names, newest first. Each opens with its revisions marked in place. Estimated by AI. It isn’t an official IELTS score.
Overall band, an AI estimate: 6.5
Essay #5
Task response 7.0, coherence 6.0, vocabulary 7.0, grammar 6.0
In this modernized world, many people spend a significant amount of time away from their families.. The reasons for their actions vary, and I believe this change benefits…
Overall band, an AI estimate: 7.0
Essay #4
Task response 7.0, coherence 7.0, vocabulary 7.0, grammar 7.0
In this contemporary world, it is true that more and more people tend to go abroad, resulting in being far away from their families. A better education system and job…
Overall band, an AI estimate: 7.0
Essay #3
Task response 8.0, coherence 7.0, vocabulary 7.0, grammar 7.0
In modern world, increasing number of people all around the world are spending less and less time with their families. This could be due to the desire to allocate more…
Overall band, an AI estimate: 8.0
Essay #2
Task response 8.0, coherence 8.0, vocabulary 8.0, grammar 8.0
Family time is shrinking in the lives of many, with people increasingly spending time away from their households. While there are two primary reasons why this is…
Overall band, an AI estimate: 7.0
Essay #1
Task response 7.0, coherence 7.0, vocabulary 7.0, grammar 7.0
Today, it is common to see people being far away from their families for an extended period. While this phenomenon can be put down to several reasons such as work and…
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