Negative news in the media: IELTS Task 2 essay #2, band 9.0
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298 words. Marked by Axiom on 7 February 2025. Estimated by AI. It isn’t an official IELTS score.
Task 2298 words
The tendency for news reports in the media to focus on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful to the individual and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
The tendency for the media to focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments can have harmful effects on both individuals and society. I agree with this statement because constant exposure to crises increases anxiety and stress, and it also creates a distorted view of reality.
Although the media’s focus on problems can seem negative, it is important to acknowledge that it can raise awareness of critical issues. For example, highlighting problems like climate change, poverty, or corruption can push governments and organizations to take action. When people are made aware of such issues, public pressure often leads to policy changes and reforms that aim to improve society. Without media coverage, many critical problems may be ignored or remain unresolved.
However, constant exposure to crises does increase anxiety and stress. When people are continually exposed to news about disasters, crime, and emergencies, they may begin to feel anxious and helpless. This phenomenon, known as "headline stress disorder," makes individuals worry more about their safety and future. As a result, they may feel overwhelmed and pessimistic, which negatively impacts their mental well-being.
Furthermore, focusing on negative news creates a distorted view of reality. The world may seem more dangerous and threatening than it actually is, leading to unnecessary fear and mistrust. For example, people might avoid traveling, socializing, or participating in public life because they fear crime or disease. This fear can limit individuals’ experiences and make them feel more isolated.
In conclusion, while media coverage of critical issues can be beneficial by raising awareness and pushing for change, the constant focus on negative news has harmful effects. It increases stress and anxiety and creates an unrealistic perception of the world. A balanced approach in media reporting is essential to protect individuals and society from these negative impacts.
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Coherence & cohesion
Band 9.0/ 9
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Grammar & accuracy
Band 9.0/ 9
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Lexical resource
Band 9.0/ 9
The essay uses a wide range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic language. The writer demonstrates a flexible use of a wide range of vocabulary with very natural and sophisticated control of lexical features.
Task response
Band 9.0/ 9
The essay fully addresses the task. It presents a well-developed response with relevant, extended and supported ideas. The writer's position is clear throughout the essay.
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