Imported or local food: IELTS Task 2 essay #3, band 7.5
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Task 2370 words
In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?
In many countries today, more and more people are buying food from other countries instead of food that is grown in their own country. This is a common situation, and it is important to understand why this is happening and what can be done to help local food producers.
For example, many people believe French cheese or Italian pasta is more delicious and real, so they choose them even if they are more expensive. Another reason is that people like to try something new. For example, Japanese sushi or Mexican tacos are popular in different parts of the world because people want new food experiences.
Coherence & cohesion
RevisedImported food is often perceived as superior in quality and uniqueness, which is a key factor in its preference.
The revision provides a more formal and academic tone.
Lexical resource
RevisedPeople often believe that food from other countries, particularly those renowned for their cuisine, offers a better taste.
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Lexical resource
RevisedMany people, particularly the younger generation, enjoy exploring cuisine from other cultures.
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Due to international trade, many shops and supermarkets sell food from other countries. A fourth reason is advertising. Big food companies use strong advertising and social media to promote their products. When people see these ads, they often think imported food is better. For example, an advertisement for American snacks might make people choose those snacks instead of local ones. Local food is often fresher, healthier, and better for the environment because it does not travel long distances. For example, vegetables from nearby farms are usually picked on the same day they are sold. Another way is to give money support. Governments can help farmers by giving them money or lowering their taxes, so their food costs less. These steps can make local food cheaper and more popular.
Coherence & cohesion
RevisedAdditionally, due to globalization, imported food is readily available, which is another significant factor.
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Grammar & accuracy
RevisedDue to rapid transportation, perishable items such as fruit from South America can be sold in Europe just a few days after harvest.
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Lexical resource
RevisedTo encourage people to choose local food, one effective strategy could be to educate them about its benefits.
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Grammar & accuracy
RevisedRetail establishments can also provide discounts on locally sourced food.
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Coherence & cohesion
RevisedIn conclusion, the preference for imported food is often due to its perceived better taste, greater variety, accessibility, and effective advertising.
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Grammar & accuracy
RevisedHowever, with improved information and support, a greater number of people may opt for local food in the future.
The revision provides a more complex sentence structure.
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Coherence & cohesion
Band 8.0/ 9
The essay is logically organized and ideas are connected well. The use of cohesive devices is good, and the essay has a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
Suggestions
- Try to use a wider range of linking words and phrases to show more complex relationships between ideas.
Sentence revisions 3
RevisedImported food is often perceived as superior in quality and uniqueness, which is a key factor in its preference.
The revision provides a more formal and academic tone.
RevisedAdditionally, due to globalization, imported food is readily available, which is another significant factor.
The revision provides a more formal and academic tone.
RevisedIn conclusion, the preference for imported food is often due to its perceived better taste, greater variety, accessibility, and effective advertising.
The revision provides a more formal and academic tone.
Grammar & accuracy
Band 7.0/ 9
The essay uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms and there are very few grammatical errors. However, there is room for more complex sentence structures.
Sentence revisions 3
RevisedDue to rapid transportation, perishable items such as fruit from South America can be sold in Europe just a few days after harvest.
The revision provides a more complex sentence structure.
RevisedHowever, with improved information and support, a greater number of people may opt for local food in the future.
The revision provides a more complex sentence structure.
RevisedRetail establishments can also provide discounts on locally sourced food.
The revision provides a more complex sentence structure.
Lexical resource
Band 7.0/ 9
The essay uses a good range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of informal language that could be improved.
Sentence revisions 3
RevisedPeople often believe that food from other countries, particularly those renowned for their cuisine, offers a better taste.
The revision provides a more formal and academic tone.
RevisedMany people, particularly the younger generation, enjoy exploring cuisine from other cultures.
The revision provides a more formal and academic tone.
RevisedTo encourage people to choose local food, one effective strategy could be to educate them about its benefits.
The revision provides a more formal and academic tone.
Task response
Band 8.0/ 9
The essay addresses all parts of the task and provides a clear, well-developed response with relevant, extended and supported ideas. However, the essay could be improved by providing more specific examples to support the arguments.
Suggestions
- Try to include more specific examples to support your arguments. This will help to provide a more in-depth analysis and make your writing more persuasive.
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