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IELTS Task 2 discussion essay: Parents and their children’s crimes

A Task 2 discussion question. Explain both views fairly, then give your own opinion. The question asks for all three, so an essay on one side only answers part of it.

2 students’ essays below, each marked by Axiom, from band 7.0 to 7.5. Updated on 16 September 2026.

The question

Nowadays, some people think that parents should be punished for illegal actions of their children. Others think children are responsible for their actions.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Students’ essays on this question, marked by Axiom

Across these 2 essays the average band is 7.3: Task Response 8.0, Coherence and Cohesion 7.0, Lexical Resource 7.5, Grammatical Range and Accuracy 7.5. Coherence and Cohesion was the weakest criterion.

Real answers, shared without their writers’ names, newest first. Each opens with its revisions marked in place. Estimated by AI. It isn’t an official IELTS score.

  • Overall band, an AI estimate: 7.5

    Essay #2

    Task response 8.0, coherence 7.0, vocabulary 8.0, grammar 8.0

    There is an ongoing debate over who should be punished for the law-breaking activities of children, with some people citing parents as a responsible party, while others…

    Task 2, 413 words, 16 September 2026

  • Overall band, an AI estimate: 7.0

    Essay #1

    Task response 8.0, coherence 7.0, vocabulary 7.0, grammar 7.0

    There is an ongoing debate over who should be responsible for crimes committed by children. While some believe that parents should face the punishment on the behalf of…

    Task 2, 419 words, 15 September 2026

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