Online teaching replacing classrooms: IELTS Task 2 essay #2, band 6.5

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Task 2394 words

Educational institutions are replacing offline teaching technique with online teaching. Is this a positive or negative development?

A growing number of learning institutions are prefering to give knowledge online rather than in person. While some may assume its effects are mostly negative, i firmly argue in favor of this trend for various reasons.

Grammar & accuracy
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RevisedA growing number of learning institutions prefer delivering knowledge online rather than in person.
The verb 'to give' is not typically used in this context. The verb 'to deliver' is more appropriate.

We all are used to going to traditional schools, entering a classroom and learning a topic there by listening to the explanations given by tutors or teachers. This has been the case for many decades but starting to change now, thanks to the availabilty of modern technologies. For the past 5-10 years, educational institutions have started to use electronic devices, such as laptops, screens and even smartphones to make their lessons even more understandable and appealing. For example, instead of taking tests on paper, they use games demonstarting the subject they're currently learning to make students even more interested and lose the tone of boredom. Now, its getting even more advanced: you stay at home waiting for your class to start on your PC. Students won't waste time getting ready or on transportation, the same is true for teachers as well. The time previously spend on looks and road, now can be used for far better activities - completing assignments or homeworks, revising the topic carefully, doing further research and for relaxation or entertainment purposes sometimes.

Coherence & cohesion
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RevisedTraditionally, we have all been accustomed to going to school, entering the classroom, and learning from the explanations provided by our tutors or teachers.
The revision provides a smoother transition and more precise language.
Lexical resource
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RevisedThis has been the norm for many decades, but is now starting to change due to the availability of modern technologies.
The revision provides a more precise and formal phrasing.
Coherence & cohesion
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RevisedIn the past 5-10 years, educational institutions have begun to utilize electronic devices, such as laptops, screens, and even smartphones to enhance the understandability and appeal of their lessons.
The revision provides a more formal and academic tone.
Coherence & cohesion
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RevisedNow, the situation is becoming even more advanced: you can stay at home and wait for your class to start on your PC.
The revision provides a more formal and academic tone.
Lexical resource
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RevisedThe time that was previously spent on commutes and appearance efforts can now be utilized for more productive activities such as completing assignments, revising the topics, and conducting further research or entertainment activities.
The revision provides a more precise and formal phrasing.

In addition, there may be cases when student can't attend the class for personal reasons or issues regarding their health. As a result they will miss the details and the materials of the lesson if the event is offline. However, in online education its not a big hustle, as classes are often recorded and sent to group chats. Now, students can attend the classes from the hospital or home if (they got broken legs), and watch it later when they are done with their private problems. Moreover, online teaching offers non-limited time and materials. Contrary to limited class-time in face-to-face sessions, You can attend each class for howlong you like and not get scolded when you are late. Additional study materials and websites are also provided for further investigation, which is a big plus bonus.

Grammar & accuracy
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RevisedHowever, in online education, it is not a big hassle, as classes are often recorded and sent to group chats.
The word 'hustle' is not appropriate in this context. The word 'hassle' is more suitable.

In conclusion, schools and universities are starting to use online teaching more than offline one. Although many people don't want this to happen, I think this trend is a full positive development since its more convenient for both learners and teachers with better quality materials and timing.

Lexical resource
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RevisedDespite the reservations of some, I believe that this trend represents a fully positive development as it is more convenient for both learners and teachers, and allows for better quality materials and timing.
The revision provides a more precise and formal phrasing.

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What Axiom wrote for each criterion: why the answer earned its band, and what to work on next.

Coherence & cohesion

Band 6.0/ 9

The essay is logically organized and the progression of ideas is clear. However, there are some areas where the flow of ideas could be improved. The essay is well-organized, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs that each discuss a different benefit of online teaching, and a conclusion that restates your position. You use transition words effectively to guide the reader through your argument. However, the flow of ideas could be improved by more effectively linking the benefits you discuss to your overall argument. Additionally, the coherence of your argument could be enhanced by providing more specific examples to support your points.

Suggestions

Try to use a wider range of linking words to connect your ideas more effectively.
Ensure that your examples are directly relevant to the point you are making.

Sentence revisions 3

RevisedTraditionally, we have all been accustomed to going to school, entering the classroom, and learning from the explanations provided by our tutors or teachers.
The revision provides a smoother transition and more precise language.
RevisedIn the past 5-10 years, educational institutions have begun to utilize electronic devices, such as laptops, screens, and even smartphones to enhance the understandability and appeal of their lessons.
The revision provides a more formal and academic tone.
RevisedNow, the situation is becoming even more advanced: you can stay at home and wait for your class to start on your PC.
The revision provides a more formal and academic tone.

Grammar & accuracy

Band 7.0/ 9

The essay uses a variety of complex structures. Your essay showcases a variety of sentence structures, and the majority of sentences are free from grammatical errors. However, there are a few sentences where the use of articles and prepositions is awkward or incorrect, which slightly affects the clarity of your writing. Paying closer attention to these grammatical details could further improve the quality of your writing.

Sentence revisions 3

RevisedA growing number of learning institutions prefer delivering knowledge online rather than in person.
The verb 'to give' is not typically used in this context. The verb 'to deliver' is more appropriate.
RevisedNow, it is getting even more advanced: you can stay at home and wait for your class to start on your PC.
The contraction 'it's' should be replaced with 'it is' for clarity. Alternatively, the phrase 'and and' can be removed for a more concise and clear sentence.
RevisedHowever, in online education, it is not a big hassle, as classes are often recorded and sent to group chats.
The word 'hustle' is not appropriate in this context. The word 'hassle' is more suitable.

Lexical resource

Band 7.0/ 9

The essay demonstrates a good command of a broad lexical repertoire. You demonstrate a good command of a range of vocabulary relevant to the topic, such as "electronic devices," "traditional schools," and "classroom." Your use of terminology is appropriate and contributes to a clear and formal style. However, the essay would benefit from a wider range of vocabulary to more effectively convey your ideas and engage the reader.

Sentence revisions 3

RevisedThis has been the norm for many decades, but is now starting to change due to the availability of modern technologies.
The revision provides a more precise and formal phrasing.
RevisedThe time that was previously spent on commutes and appearance efforts can now be utilized for more productive activities such as completing assignments, revising the topics, and conducting further research or entertainment activities.
The revision provides a more precise and formal phrasing.
RevisedDespite the reservations of some, I believe that this trend represents a fully positive development as it is more convenient for both learners and teachers, and allows for better quality materials and timing.
The revision provides a more precise and formal phrasing.

Task response

Band 7.0/ 9

The essay addresses the task effectively. You have clearly stated your position and supported it with relevant examples. However, the argument could be further developed by addressing potential counterarguments. You have addressed the task directly by presenting a clear position that online teaching is more beneficial due to its convenience and use of modern technologies. Your position is supported by relevant examples that effectively demonstrate the benefits of online teaching for both students and teachers. However, the essay could be further improved by addressing potential counterarguments more thoroughly to strengthen your position.

Suggestions

Consider addressing potential counterarguments to strengthen your position.

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