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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.

Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

It is obvious that more and more universities are putting their courses online and encouraging students to take classes using the internet. We can observe the substantial benefits of this approach. First of all, computer education benefits more people. Not only do students from specific universities have the opportunity to take professional classes online, but individuals who are interested in this subject can also acquire knowledge. Secondly, computer education is definitely more convenient than traditional classes. There is no restriction in computer education; students can take class anytime, anywhere, when they are available. Ultimately, computer education offers a financial advantage. Attending a university incurs significant study fees. However, online classes are cheaper, so most individuals can afford this expenditure.

Despite the previously mentioned advantages, computer education does have some drawbacks. Improperly using a computer causes some issues, especially for teenagers. Some students may abuse the internet and become fascinated by it. Instead of studying, they spend more time playing computer games. Moreover, people cannot distinguish the accuracy of online information; some fake and false information may be created by criminals who cheat individuals or collect their private information for money.

In conclusion, it is noticeable that computer education provides convenient and effective education opportunities that benefit entire societies. Despite some drawbacks that exist in computer education, I assert that the advantages of using computer education far outweigh the disadvantages.

6.5

The essay is logically organized and ideas are connected well. The introduction and conclusion are clear and relevant. However, there could be better use of linking words to connect ideas and paragraphs more effectively.

Suggestions
  • Use a variety of linking words to connect ideas and paragraphs more effectively.
  • Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that all sentences in the paragraph relate to this topic.

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